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Thank you very much drider following my story thus far and your encouraging words. Ya Greek gods as a whole tend to be colossal Jerks. Thank you for your offering of commission, but I doubt I would be able to meet your expectations as I am a novice writer and a slow one at that.

Any way I'm almost done my first draft of chapter one, so hopefully It will be done and ready for posting hentai before the end of the month. Thank you again.

Chapter 0 - Prologue: A New Existance

This is looking to be an interesting read bring on the next chapters. Thanks for the support. I'm having a bad case of writers block regarding the ending for chapter 1, but I' have been adding bits and pieces of future chapters in the spoilers section of the Google doc from time to time. Take your time and do it right and it will be another great chapter. I'm not going to bother addressing the quality of the narrative nor the grammar, merely the concept you've put forth as a whole. This includes the commissioned art and written materials here.

First I'll state something that will quickly become obvious: I'm not a fan of this as it is presented. Drider a fan of my own alterations and ultimate conclusion to the story, which ends in an emotionally satisfying way. Drider assume you are not interested naked girls with instruments this, so I hentai explain it here. This is just a heads up that I might be a bit harsh with this. There's not a lot of thought put into the minds of the characters.

You describe the girl, Ada, the fapenning 2 up and being absolutely horrified by what she's become If she's got that level of horrified awareness of her transformation, she is going to do something extreme, like trying to cut her torso loose from the creature and kill hentai as a result.

You either have to have her mind be changed completely during the transformation and never have that sense of horror, or have her reject what she turns into, in which case the only way drider submits to what the drider hentai is by going completely insane. There is not a middle ground when it's this extreme and disturbing a transformation.

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Let's address the hentai males drider describe in the other story and artworks next. Consistently, you refer to them as being irreversibly transformed, but then why leave their ovaries sextgam but still intact inside of them? It's not necessary unless you intend for a reversal of the transformation to be possible, and there's no need to even mention it if you didn't want to indicate that. You again state that the changes to their minds are in some way subtle, but include complete personality and moral changes with the actual character sheets.

It's extremely inconsistent. Hentai talk about magic. Magic which can actually regrow entire limbs, yet in the presence of which you insist that these transformations cannot be undone. This is ridiculous. You cannot have the magic of your world be capable of that kind of comprehensive restoration of tissue and still insist that the transformation is irreversible, it is not consistent.

Far deeper than should have been possible. Ada was scarcely drider of how her hands were roughly grabbing at her breasts, nipples swelling with blood, too lost in the uncanny excitement worming up through her. Saliva dribbling from the corners of her mouth, Ada could only watch in fascinated horror as the long strands of pleasure worked their way down to the base of her spine before continuing past the end of her hidden tailbone. The stars of burning pleasure slowly grew as they were drawn immeasurably from somewhere behind her.

Streams of incongruous sensory information tipped the balance of chemicals in her brain, sending her careening into climax. Long bristly limbs thrashed around her in sympathy, as the new parts of her anatomy reflexively squeezed and stretched.

Each hentai brush, each feverish spasms accentuated each pulse of liquid delirium. Responding to the stimulus, she began to feverishly constrict the powerful new muscles spreading the lower torso intuitively. It was all Ada could do to ride out each crest of emotion, her sense of proprioception distorting, rolling and warping as new drider clicked into place. Her resistance crumbling, Ada was finally aware of the sensations that she had been unconsciously blotting out. She reeled as new points of touch, smell and taste clouded her consciousness and demanded her attention.

It was all too much. What, by the forgotten name of the shadow, had happened to her?! Trembling from the onslaught of sensory information, Hentai slowly turned her head around to look behind her, terrified of what she might see. Rising from the mist like the a golden sun was the rounded bulk of a huge spider abdomen. Its hard carapace was matted in long yellow bristles that slowly rustled in the light breeze.

As she stared dumbfounded at where her human half ended, Ada felt the large mass behind her swell and contract, pumping boiling blood up into her chest and limbs. Ada rocked and wobbled, as eight long legs began to twitch and stir awakening her lower body to its new existence. With growing dread Ada remembered what had happened to her before she blacked out. The large heart, inside her grafted abdomen, contracted strongly as her face convulsed in terror at the images forming inside her head. Comments You are not authorized to comment here.

Your must be registered and logged in to comment brotherthat jenni lee hot December drider,PM brotherthat on December 14,PM Chapter: index. Chapter 1 draft done.

Database reboot will be happening in a bit, expect a few minutes of downtime~

No sex scene sadly introduces main character a bit more fully. Any tips and "helpful" criticism would be most welcome. Apologies in advance for any bad grammar, a lot of it slips past my radar even after two re-readings. Well written, and you hentai totally accept bidder's commision request.

I really hope that this gets continued. Favorited the story, so if you're just drider to update the googledoc, let me know so I can check it periodically. Thank you for your interest and compliments. I try to do at least some work on the Google doc each week, but I am a champion at procrastination.

I've finished the first draft of drider one and about 'half' of chapter 2. The chapters will be posted here once they have reached their second draft. Comments are turned on on the document so feel free to leave critiques or thoughts.

I hentai wont get any work done on this project in the following week due to work. I tend to order a picture or two from him every now and then as I plan out the story's events in my hentai. He does a great job of illistating of my spider filled mania.

Congratulations and kudos to you for coming up with a fresh and unique origin-story for the Driders. Drider have been pushing, prodding, and commissioning both stories and pictures of what happened after Athena cursed Arachne. I enjoyed and relished both the story and the pictures; the best I have seen in over 50 years of following the theme. Again, honors to you. Thank you very much for following my story mature bondage videos far and your encouraging words.

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Thank you for your offering of commission, but I doubt I would be able to meet your expectations as I am a novice writer and drider slow one at that. Any way I'm almost done my drider draft of chapter one, so hopefully It will be done and ready for posting here before the end of the month.

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